Monday, October 20, 2008

Miss Opportunity - Ch. 44.4

When Cami was finally calm again, she wiped her face with tissue from her purse and continued shopping with her friend. She had to keep forcing some kind of normalcy in her life, lest she really lose her mind. If not for the grace of God and the frequent contact she had with Little Man, she might have lost her mind by now.

As they passed the aisle of feminine products, Cami suddenly realized that she hadn’t seen her other friend in a while. The friend that confirmed that she wasn’t pregnant every month.

“Good Lord!” Cami exclaimed loudly, stopping short in her tracks as she mentally counted backwards.

Due to all the drama in her life lately, she’d completely lost track of her cycle over the last few months. Cami thought the extra weight she’d gained was due to all the extra food she’d consumed as she tried to eat her way out of heartbreak.

“What’s wrong?” Towanna asked with wide eyes, looking at Cami with concern all over again.

“I just realized that I might be pregnant,” Cami whispered, suddenly caring a lot about being overheard now.

Towanna’s mouth fell open in shock. Recovering quickly, she immediately took charge of the situation. “Come on, girl. We about to buy every pregnancy test up in this store today,” she said, tugging Cami behind her with one hand while pushing the grocery cart with the other.

© 2008 by Suprina Frazier


Suprina said...

That's it, y'all. The free portion of the story officially ends now. I'm going to post the link to the VOD in a few minutes, then I'm going to bed.


I'm going to rest up Monday night, respond to comments, and focus on filling orders so that as many as possible can start the VOD at the same time tomorrow night.



Jrboss said...

OMGoodness, so how is she going to handle this? Will he believe it's his? Will he think it's a setup to get him back? So many questions...LOL

Suprina, you're getting good at these cliffhangers. I'm on pins and needles, my stomach is in knots, girllll

Joy said...

Millsap BETTER NOT THINK it was a set up!!! No one told that man not towear protection that one time.

I will even be a little irritated if he thinks it is another guy... Cami has been faithful to him. Franko has confirmed it... So what if she did not drive straight back home that night. People have a right to want to cool off when they are angry... and with Millsap's temper he should have NO room to judge.

so when Cami finally tells him...
He had better just take it like the man I know he can be!

God Bless

Suprina said...

Jrboss: Those questions will be answered on the VOD.

Thanks for the compliment, girl. I'm trying to get better at my cliffhangers and hooks.

Joy: I can't comment on most of your post because it would be telling the story. But know that all of those things will be addressed on the VOD.

You're so right about Millsap not having having any room to judge though.

Anonymous said...


i know Millsap won't deny it the day he finds out which i hop eis later than sooner - i don't really like him that much right now!! If he does-i'll be waiting for him if ever there is a question and answer session on this story. ad i'll be very mad.

daysha thinks she won - keep your eyes wide open gal
bonnie thinks she's smarter than a 5th grader -huhn!- keep your eyes open mama

poor cami - thank goodness she has such supportive friends to help her. don't the other enfield cousins know what's going on???

i smell some trouble in the drug arena and it can't come too soon - i can't wait for Millsap and Mike Mike to get out of the game. Franco is just plain nasty. twin sisters??? Y-U-C-K.


Suprina said...

Sharon: The pregnancy question is answered on the VOD, so I definitely can't comment on that here. lol.

Daysha and Bonnie got their day coming. Again, you'll have to find out on the VOD.

Yes, I'm happy about Towanna being in Cami's life. She really needs them now that her and Millsap are splitsville.

Oh, yes, there is definitely trouble brewing in the drug arena. BIG trouble unlike anything that city has ever known before.

As for Franco is nasty, I agree. But what about the equally nasty twins. I mean, they're sisters! Double yuck!!