Enticing Mr. Wrong - Ch. 49.2

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Suprina said…
To all: I'm thinking about changing the book's name. Instead of Enticing Mr. Wrong, I was thinking of:

"How Mr. Wrong Became Mr. Right"

Any suggestions?
9:51 AM
Anonymous said…
I don't like it. For several reasons:
1)That doesn't sound like it came from you.You have a certain style with your titles and it doesn't fit

2)The book is mostly from Aisha's POV and that title implies it's from Bonz's POV.
3)Enticing Mr. Wrong gives a more true picture of what the book's about. Aisha did try to entice Bonz. Greg as Bonz is Mr. Wrong.
I personally like your current title but -
What about "Becoming Mr. Right"
"Loving Mr. Wrong"
2:04 PM
Suprina said…
Tonia: I see your point. I might keep the current title since it is mostly from Aisha's POV. Thanks for the honest feedback.
2:16 PM
Anonymous said…
I think a good name if you were going to change it would be "Roulette" like the game russian roulette. Or "Consequences"
One thing I do know for sure is, Cami is a nasty, scandelous, no good skank and Blade is a straight up Dog! He deserves whatever he gets.
10:24 PM
Suprina said…
Carrie: Still thinking on that title issue. I'm starting to like the old one again. I also like the one of titles Tonia recommended "Loving Mr. Wrong" Because that is exactly what Aisha ended up doing after enticing Bonz.
1:07 AM
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