Enticing Mr. Wrong - Ch. 34.3

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Suprina said…
To all: That's it for now. I need to get some rest and I have homework to finish. Hopefully y'all won't be too mad and disappointed on account of the 6 posts you got today.

If I'm not too tired, I may post more later tonight, but I'm not making no promises.
2:28 PM
Anonymous said…
Least you did not leave us at a very high cliff. We still want more, but that is normal. Hope Bonz's plan backfires back at him. He needs to learn that you don't cheat or even attemp to cheat on Aisha.
3:48 PM
Anonymous said…
Yes, I need a little rest also. This story has taken on a life of it's own and I've drained every ounce of energy I had trying to keep up with it. I have to tell you girlfriend, you got me on this one but that's a good thing. I can hardly stay away from my computer for more than an hour. So, thank you for the rest. I sure do need it. And poor Tonia (lol) I think she needs some too.
3:56 PM
Suprina said…
Jessie: Bonz wasn't about to cheat. Or did I not make that clear? I'll double check. Even still the brother still looked very guilty with Co-co at his table. lol.

Carrie: Get that rest, girl. Because a makeup scene is coming up along with a new twist to the story.

Question(s) for the group: Have I put too much drama in the book? Or are we fine the way we are?

Carrie says she's drained and that's a good thing, what about everyone else?
6:12 PM
Anonymous said…
I am with Carrie I need a rest. I think this book hits home for me. I see sooo many of my family members in the characters.
I don't feel like its too much drama. If this was a paperback, its the type you would carry around with you and pull it out, read some. Then go about your day and the pull it out again. With it being on line, and trying to keep up with the posts, you don't get that breather you take when a book is really good and intense.
Plus its fun, to comment and read other comments as you go.
Keep up the drama!
9:55 PM
Anonymous said…
The dram-a-meter says you are right on time. Keep it coming. OMG!I think I'm going to take a bubble bath soak and get as much rest as I can. I can never tell where your creative twists will take me.(lol)
11:03 PM
Suprina said…
Tonia & Carrie: Thanks for the additional feedback about the drama levels. For a minute there I thought I was wearing y'all out with the highs and lows of this book. But then again, doesn't life get that way sometimes? At least my life does. lol.

Going to edit now. We'll see how much posting I can get done tonight/early this morning my time.
12:53 AM
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