Enticing Mr. Wrong - Ch. 32
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Miss Opportunity - Ch. 12.4
Three hours later, Mike-Mike and Tonja returned to his car after spending some quality time at his place. Quality, as in this was the best sexual experience they’d ever had in their lives. Playing from the car stereo was the same soothing CD by Kem that they’d listened to earlier. Tonja insisted that Mike-Mike bring it out to the car since it contained her newest favorite song - Tonight . “How do you want to play this out, Tonja?” Mike-Mike asked as he drove to her mother’s house where she would be staying tonight. “I really don’t know how we should play this out, Michael,” Tonja replied from the passenger seat. She looked so sated and relaxed sitting there. All of her previous anger and frustration were gone. She’d also taken to calling Mike-Mike by his first name instead of his nickname. “Well, the way I see it, we have three options,” Mike-Mike said. “Option one, we can pretend this never happened on account of the club’s no-fraternizing rule and go back to the way thing...
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I am glad to find out why Bonz is in the game. Most people don't go into the drug game for the reasons the "public" might think.
Bonz is too trusting of those closest to him. Look at E-Blade & Aisha.
I am starting to think ol Freddy didn't kill Dominic. Maybe E-Blade had something to do with it or maybe those two did it together. Hmmm?
Well, I am off to class! I can check back for another chapter during class if you want to add another one (Hint)
As for Bonz's trust issues, they mirror my cousin's to the tee. Cuz trusted his homeboys too much, especially those who'd come up in the game with him.
Bonz is trusting Aisha with all this info because he's in love and desperate to show her that he really wants their relationship to work. The whole 'I trust you with something, you trust me in return' thing.
Tonia, I'm so glad you didn't fall for my little twist. That you remembered an earlier hint about how Dominic DID NOT commit suicide, though it seems so right now.
You can check back after class, another chapter should be up. I'm working on it now.
It also emphasizes his very real human side. Bonz felt that the streets led him to this life and it was the only way he could survive yet he is trying to do it "ethically" in the only way he knows how.
Despite his job, I am going to have to move Bonz to second on my list of favorite heroes in your books.(Dallas is still number one!)
Carrie: I'm not saying anything about how did what right now. If I do, I'm going to give the whole thing away. What's the point of reading the book after that? lol. Now go on back to work. Don't get in trouble on my behalf. Believe me, a sista knows about how good jobs are hard to find. *whispering* Come back on your break. lol.