Enticing Mr. Wrong - Ch. 56.3

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Anonymous said…
My heart has started back but now I am speechless.
This chapter reminds me of a guy i knew in school. he was shot in the back three times by a friend in the drug game with him and was left paralyzed.
I am glad you are getting this story out there. So many of our men and women have lived this life or know someone that has.
10:10 AM
Anonymous said…
wow Suprina.... that was so intense... poor guy... i really feel for him.... i hope no one was hurt in the explosion... tho i'm happy the lab blew up!
10:30 AM
Anonymous said…
Lawd!!!!Suprina r u gonna let Racker die and Bonz end up paralyze?...What a horrible way to be betrayed!!! *sniffing*
10:48 AM
Anonymous said…
Lord have mercy on Bonz! Please Lord! I'm sitting here at work tripping. I am literally stuck on stupid and don't know what to say...I don't beleive that raggedy heart wanna be hustler did that to Racker and Bonz. I knew it was going to be something with him and Bonz but.... Racker? he was the peace maker in the bunch. HIS DAY IS COMING. And please make it soon.

Suprina, please get this book to the publisher ASAP! This is a must read.
11:02 AM
Suprina said…
To all: Such a myriad of emotions in your comments. Y'all must really be emotionally invested in these characters.

*whispering*

I am too. My hands were a little on the shaky side when I edited that betrayal scene.
11:36 AM
Suprina said…
Transferring Vongai's comments from another blog:

"SUPRINA (shouting!weeping even) how could you kill Racker? well i mean E-Blade did it but why? I feel sad for Alexis and her babies! But at least her man had married her, but still i'm heartbroken. Can we kill somebody else? someone like Cami? anyone but Racker!!!!!!!!!sigh"

Vongai: Just hold your horses. Stop wishing death on folks. Remember sometimes innocent people die...sometimes they DON'T.

Stay tuned and you'll see...
11:46 AM
Anonymous said…
I just read Vongai's comment and I had to laugh. I felt your heart on that one (lol).
11:54 AM
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