Enticing Mr. Wrong - Ch. 30.2

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Suprina said…
To all: Going to bed now, y'all. My eyes and hands are tired. Need to give them a rest. Hopefully the last few posts will hold you for a while. Will try to post again late Sunday night, early Monday.

Suprina

PS. I think we all know what's about to go down next. lol.
3:47 AM
Anonymous said…
AAAAGGHHHH!!! This is the most intense story I've read ever. The rubber is about to meet the road. I was praying there was another chapter behind this one. I found myself touching and ageeing with LaQuetta (lol). Bonz is the man for her. The waters are about to be troubled and some testing is about to go on. I can feel it in my sanctified soul.
10:03 AM
Suprina said…
Anon: lol. You tickle me for real. I love all the enthusiasm. 'Touching and agreeing with Laquetta' now that quote made my day! lol.

To all: I don't know if I'm going to meet my Oct 10th deadline. If I don't, it won't be for lack of trying. It's all this new stuff, new chapters, new insights God is giving me that's what's slowing up the editing process.

I'm not complaining, because the new things are great and will add so much value to the story, I'm just sad that I might not have the story in print BEFORE the anniversary of my cousin's death. But then again, God is a miracle worker so the story just might be finished before then. Or maybe HE might want the printed novel to come out at the end of October or maybe around the holidays.

*shrugging*

I don't know. What I do know is that I'm not going to rush this story. So buckle your seatbelts, ladies (and any gentleman lurkers), we have more distance to cover on this rollercoaster ride of love.

Suprina
11:58 AM
Anonymous said…
I agree with Anon. this is very intense! Bonz and Aisha are good together. The soulmate kind of thing. I was also praying that there was a chapter behind this one.
I can't wait to see how you are going to wrap up her brother's murder, her deception, Bonz's job as a pharmaceutical rep.(LOL), and mean ol freddy's part in it all.
I am going to pray you meet you deadline with God's guidance.
12:42 PM
Suprina said…
Tonia: God just answered your prayer, because I just posted a chapter after this one. I plan to post all of Ch. 31 if time permits while I'm in between cooking Sunday dinner and waiting for guests to come over at 4pm.

May my hands fly across the keyboard, Lord.

Thanks for your prayers as well, Tonia.
1:13 PM
Anonymous said…
Wow! I've been tryin to meet up wit you guys cos i've been so busy with work. Gurl, i gotta congratulate u on dis one cos dis is really intense. I found myself both smiling and crying at the same time. I wish i was d one in the story recievin all that attention.
Cant wait for Aisha to say yes, so that some real romance is gonna start. I dont really like E-Blade or watever his name is. I got this huge suspicion dat he is behind d death of Dominic, and i hope u prove me rite gurl.
tekia and keep it coming pls
Kassie
1:52 PM
Suprina said…
Kassie: Hey, girl! Glad you could join us. Did you have to speed read to catch up with the rest of us?

As for whose behind Dominic's death, that is a wait and see moment. lol.

Stay tuned...this story just seems to get better and better (at least to me).
2:08 PM
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